This comment by a beta-reader absolutely made my day: "This whole scene […] is unexpected and satisfying. […] It feels so natural and obvious in hindsight I’m almost annoyed with myself as a reader for not expecting it." ❤️
This comment by a beta-reader absolutely made my day: "This whole scene […] is unexpected and satisfying. […] It feels so natural and obvious in hindsight I’m almost annoyed with myself as a reader for not expecting it." ❤️